Comments on: Worship – An unfinished poem http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/ {o}riginal poetry and public thoughts Sat, 10 Jul 2010 08:35:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Linette http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-415 Linette Sat, 03 May 2008 02:59:06 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/#comment-415 Will, I have a gift for you at http://thepenvirtuosa.blogspot.com. Enjoy! Will, I have a gift for you at http://thepenvirtuosa.blogspot.com. Enjoy!

]]> By: Linette http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-413 Linette Sat, 03 May 2008 01:44:35 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/#comment-413 Will, you're definitely on to something here. How wonderful, how rich, how thoughtful, how honest...and yet unfinished. When you finally put a period behind this piece, I know I'll be blow away. Keep the faith! Will, you’re definitely on to something here. How wonderful, how rich, how thoughtful, how honest…and yet unfinished. When you finally put a period behind this piece, I know I’ll be blow away. Keep the faith!

]]> By: Will http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Will Mon, 17 Sep 2007 01:09:47 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/#comment-3 Thanks, Joseph. I'm glad that you could identify with this piece. Walking the line of faith and life is a tightrope at times. Thanks, Joseph.
I’m glad that you could identify with this piece.

Walking the line of faith and life is a tightrope at times.

]]> By: Joseph Ross http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Joseph Ross Sun, 16 Sep 2007 12:27:55 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/08/24/worship-an-unfinished-poem/#comment-2 Will, I'm glad you shared this poem. It speaks to an experience I have felt in the last several years -- for me, the loss of faith, and especially, of the ability to share a common faith, in public. The connection between "thirst" and "stumble" is one I feel that I know. Thank you. Will, I’m glad you shared this poem. It speaks to an experience I have felt in the last several years — for me, the loss of faith, and especially, of the ability to share a common faith, in public. The connection between “thirst” and “stumble” is one I feel that I know. Thank you.

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