Comments on: Jumping Castle http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/09/15/jumping-castle/ {o}riginal poetry and public thoughts Thu, 21 Aug 2008 18:25:42 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: Will http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/09/15/jumping-castle/#comment-7 Will Fri, 21 Sep 2007 02:25:08 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/09/15/jumping-castle/#comment-7 Thanks for the input, Thom. Interesting take on the last stanza. I'll experiment with that. Thanks for the input, Thom.
Interesting take on the last stanza. I’ll experiment with that.

]]> By: thom http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/09/15/jumping-castle/#comment-4 thom Thu, 20 Sep 2007 04:07:35 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2007/09/15/jumping-castle/#comment-4 I love the subtle rhymes here Will. I think the poem ends after the third stanza. The last stanza tells us something the rest of the poem has already said. I love the subtle rhymes here Will. I think the poem ends after the third stanza. The last stanza tells us something the rest of the poem has already said.

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