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The Tangible Presence

( Day #2)

I can feel the air move
As I breathe. Not in my lungs
Or through my nose or mouth
But around me

Like the pressure you feel
When somebody stands too close
Invading your space and
Compressing the air in between

But it’s all around me
Pushing in and against me
Making itself known by
Every move I make
By every breath I take
So I breathe and
Breathe it into me

This entry was posted on Wednesday, April 2nd, 2008 at 8:04 pm and is filed under NaPoWriMo. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed. You can leave a response, or trackback from your own site.

4 Responses to “The Tangible Presence”

  1. This is a fine piece, you really make us feel it!

    Edward S. Gault
    April 3rd, 2008

  2. creepy… weird… comforting… who is that presence?

    thom
    April 3rd, 2008

  3. Heh, good question, Thom.
    You mean…nobody else feels that? ;-)

    Will
    April 3rd, 2008

  4. @Edward, thanks! I was hoping for that.

    Will
    April 6th, 2008

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