Comments on: Mist http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2008/04/05/mist/ {o}riginal poetry and public thoughts Sun, 23 Nov 2008 11:46:04 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.6.2 By: Will http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2008/04/05/mist/#comment-350 Will Sun, 06 Apr 2008 23:13:17 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2008/04/05/mist/#comment-350 @Cendrine, Thanks! @thom, Good point about word choices. I'm going to rework a few of these after the month is over and I think this is going to be one of them. @Cendrine, Thanks!

@thom, Good point about word choices. I’m going to rework a few of these after the month is over and I think this is going to be one of them.

]]> By: thom http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2008/04/05/mist/#comment-349 thom Sun, 06 Apr 2008 21:01:18 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2008/04/05/mist/#comment-349 great last line. I step off. Just wonderful. The act of flying... hmmm... is there a way you can incorporate that feeling into your word choices? dunno. But, just wonderful. -tmi great last line. I step off. Just wonderful. The act of flying… hmmm… is there a way you can incorporate that feeling into your word choices? dunno. But, just wonderful. -tmi

]]> By: Cendrine Marrouat http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2008/04/05/mist/#comment-342 Cendrine Marrouat Sun, 06 Apr 2008 04:59:57 +0000 http://www.willbrownonline.com/poetry/2008/04/05/mist/#comment-342 Wonderful poem about the discovery of one's inner power and gift. You did a great great job! Wonderful poem about the discovery of one’s inner power and gift. You did a great great job!

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