(NaPoWriMo Day#24)
Have you ever held your hand still
Just above a river’s passing water
Liquid rushing by reaching for your skin
Jumping up; eager to commune with you
Beckoning you to dip a finger in
[m]y original poetry and public thoughts on the creative process. Feel free to share your thoughts on what you read here. -[w]ill
(NaPoWriMo Day#24)
Have you ever held your hand still
Just above a river’s passing water
Liquid rushing by reaching for your skin
Jumping up; eager to commune with you
Beckoning you to dip a finger in
Will,
I have. And you made me miss it this morning. Great job connecting with the reader, being sensory, and drawing memory to moment. Great job!
thom
thom ingram
April 25th, 2008
Thanks, Thom.
I enjoyed writing this one.
Will
April 26th, 2008